Category: Fictional writing

• Rewriting an old excerpt.

  

  The old: Iiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeeee. My ears dampened and deaf with the sound of nothingness amplified tenfold. chest pounding, drenched in sweat. Legs trembling, feet iced over. Face warm, hot flushed and worried.Stomach twisted and tied in knots, though the pain might have one seem that it’s somehow torn itself in two. Hands trembling, chilled to the…

  Austin

  June 24, 2026

  Fictional writing

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